On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to
cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
● describe the item you lost
● explain how you lost it
● tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to apprise you with a loss of my Mac Book Pro while I was travelling from Canada to U.S.A . Last Friday, accidentally I forgot to collect my notebook from air plane and after realized my mistake I lodged to airport authority on next day but all in vain.
As I am a CPA by profession , thus I have to travel a lot to complete my statutory assignments and in order to utilize the time efficiently I prefer to do my work during travelling. Hence, I was completing my official work in the plane and suddenly, fall asleep and omitted to take my laptop with me.
Now, the airlines has notified me that my laptop is impossible to trace, thus it would be highly appreciable that if you considered it as totally lost and allow me the adequate amount of compensation. Instead of endowing me compensation , It would be grateful if you arrange my a new Mac Book Proc. I have enclosed all details regarding insurance policy along with necessary documents.
I am anticipating a positive and prompt response from your side.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to apprise y...
^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ile I was travelling from Canada to U.S.A . Last Friday, accidentally I forgot to...
^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le I was travelling from Canada to U.S.A . Last Friday, accidentally I forgot to c...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dentally I forgot to collect my notebook from air plane and after realized my mis...
^^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n vain. As I am a CPA by profession , thus I have to travel a lot to complete...
^^
Line 8, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion. Instead of endowing me compensation , It would be grateful if you arrange my ...
^^
Line 8, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... policy along with necessary documents. I am anticipating a positive and prompt...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents. I am anticipating a positive and prompt response from your side.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, thus, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79214325682 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1273378507 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111737051751 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490287242276 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376529707211 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641852487513 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048924962821 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to apprise y...
^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ile I was travelling from Canada to U.S.A . Last Friday, accidentally I forgot to...
^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le I was travelling from Canada to U.S.A . Last Friday, accidentally I forgot to c...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dentally I forgot to collect my notebook from air plane and after realized my mis...
^^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n vain. As I am a CPA by profession , thus I have to travel a lot to complete...
^^
Line 8, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion. Instead of endowing me compensation , It would be grateful if you arrange my ...
^^
Line 8, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... policy along with necessary documents. I am anticipating a positive and prompt...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents. I am anticipating a positive and prompt response from your side.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, thus, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79214325682 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1273378507 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111737051751 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490287242276 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376529707211 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641852487513 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048924962821 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.