1- Some believe that people Should get a job right after school. Others say they should attend university. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is being assumed by the various people, that career should be started after completing the school. On another side numerous person believe its opposite like youngsters need to join university before the commencement of their jobs. both views have its own benefits, which will be discussed below with real facts and also present my personal opinion.
Intiating the career immediate from secondary qualification is a good opportunity to support the family in finance which will help them in their daily expenses and also helpful to collect funds for their higher studies. Moreover, this is a chance to gain experience because, practical works make men perfect in their job stream.These kinds of practices are suitable especially for poor class students for instance.
doing jobs after completing higher degrees is a better chance to join from a higher rank as compared to lower, where people do not supposed to enjoy incentives on the basis of their scales. Furthermore theory plays also very essential role to complete a particular kind of assignment like for raising turnover businessman need to know about different strategies which can only be possible in higher management course.
I personally believe that both the situations are good, because people choose their career as per the circumstances and the availability of resouces. Who do not have enough money they will try to start their career in early age as part time job so that they can make balance between family economic conditions and their studies. From others view student from rich category can easily arrange the funds for their upper qualification so, they do not bother about money they just think about passion career. Therefore, they give priority to education first and career later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20701754386 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6326220155 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635087719298 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2664779382 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148446917249 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059322346826 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407975736384 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085600343479 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619323904064 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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