The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems to you and neighbors. Write a letter to local council and mention.
• Describe how the garbage collection is not working properly
• Explain how this is affecting you and neighbors
• Suggest what should be done about this
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the new door to door garbage collecting system.
The system was working well in the starting however, it is becoming worse day by day. The lorry for the collection of the garbage earlier use to come alternate days but now it has no schedule even sometime it crosses week. The basic reason for this there is no supervisor in the garbage collection department who can have records about the sweepers and collection from areas. Most of the times sweepers are either absent or comes late in the morning.
Due to the above problem, the rubbish material got stacked in the locality and outside the house which is like an invitation to mosquitoes and flies. The foul smell coming from that garbage has started deteriorating the health of children and elderly people. The parent usually does not send their children to playing outdoor games because of the fear of infection. Besides this, we are not able to sit in our balconies or open our windows because of this smell.
I would thankful to you if you consider this matter seriously and also an alternate is kindly to hire a supervisor for the department for better results.
I look forward to hearing something positive from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...r the collection of the garbage earlier use to come alternate days but now it has n...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...schedule even sometime it crosses week. The basic reason for this there is no super...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, well, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95412844037 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5910894686 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655963302752 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5699220752 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247623255872 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707003429742 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505714136211 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107505963437 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531398432569 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.