Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People's opinion differ as to whether devoting money on art is fundamental or it can be disbursed somewhere else like health and education. Although there are some robust altercation against but I confide that, government should spent more on health and education sector. However, I shall scrutinies both views in the subsequent essay.
On the one hand, there are two presumable major factor why people argue for more investment on art. First of all, art helps to abolish people's stress. The inhabitant get refreshments by practicing art. Masses of contemporary world live a stressful life where art can be benignant for them to lead a peaceful life.
Another cause why inhabitant might argue for that is, art boosts human's self-esteem. Dwellers become better concentrator when they live on art. They concentrate much if they exercise art on daily basis.
On the other hand, despite of above arguments, I still uphold the view that bureaucrats should invest more on health and education sector. There are two prime points why I deem for that. One is, health. It is our mandatory needs. The equipment we have on our hospitals are not enough. The authority should upgrade all this with high-class facilities, and obviously cabins of medicals need to be updated as well for the patients.
Eventually, education is also our basic need. Education often addressed as backbone of a nation. An educated citizen can be efficacious for a country. And in order to do that, government should take some serious steps towards it as it shall bring pleasure. Take example of every developed country who are rolling this worlf right now. Every country that are in top today, there is a because, and it is education.
In conclusion, it can not be repudiated that art has some benefits but I surmise the merits we may get from health and education sector can vanquish it easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Peoples opinion differ as to whether devoting money on art is fundamental or...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
...ne hand, there are two presumable major factor why people argue for more investment on...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'factor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'factors'.
Suggestion: factors
...ne hand, there are two presumable major factor why people argue for more investment on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97444089457 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70141351262 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7456468827 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6956521739 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6086956522 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247095345538 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627832979417 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479983291393 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123972424269 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550326149672 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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