Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled.
A number of people believe there should be some constraints and laws for public use of noise whereas, others argue that they should be allowed to make noise freely. Although, it is true that loud noises can disturb or harm people in some ways but the freedom to use loud music is also important for having fun or some special event. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and will also share my opinion on it.
it is nothing strange that loud music can hamper some people's lives and their health. many people don't like to be disturbed when they are resting, relaxing or doing some important work, loud sounds may disrupt them during these processes especially during the night, Most of the individual after working full day likes to relax and rest at night, sleepless nights or not getting that rest may lead to several health problems. this creates many problems for the old person who is suffering from insomnia or migraine, for instance, one of the aged couple living in my area went through a heart attack due to loud music coming from a wedding nearby. due to all these reasons many individuals would like to see some strict control over the noises.
However, loud music and noises are basic elements of a function or a party to have fun, A party without some music will fade all the colors of that particular event. In between all the hustle and hard work, this proves itself as an essential element to keep one happy and healthy. For example, many therapists advise an individual suffering from depression to go out and enjoy to divert their mind. many people want to enjoy their important and once in a lifetime moments such as weddings with a loud pop and show taking away music from them would highly affect their lovely event. All these reasons counter the fact of control over noises.
In conclusion, roaring music can damage one's health which may lead to several long-lasting diseases but on the other side keeping someone away from fun and dance on their important day is also not good. I believe there should be laws against loud music which will favor both sides like allowing loud music far away from the residents area so that all the people can get what they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62307692308 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15963964413 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8551343562 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.785714286 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221168106683 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824686351463 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100955195776 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152202692771 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950735471949 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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