International sporting events make an important contribution to international peace. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
international sporting events have become a unique part in today's world, whether it is the Olympics, the world cup, or games between club teams from different countries. Generally, I think that these competitions have indeed brought people closer worldwide.
Today, international sporting occasions are actively participated in by many countries or nationalities around the world and more and more nations have put these events on their agendas. For the host nation, it is a great chance to showcase their country to the world in terms of its traditions, customs and social values. As to the athletes and visitors from forign places, they get the perfect opportunity to communicate with people from a whole different background, regardless of their beliefs, skin colours and races. people say that sporting events like these might be the only occasions when people are willing to learn to understand and appreciate each other regardless of differences and disputes because of the inborn features of sports, and therefore it is widely thought that they are hugely beneficial to humanity.
However, with the constant parade of doping cases, people start to question the meaning of these events. it is true that some athletes risk their careers, health, and reputations to cheat their way to the top of the games, but it is also important to recognize that there are far more athletes who are competing in the true spirit of sportsmanship. So although there might be controversy, international sporting events overall bring people together for a good reason and that is why we can see people still cheering for others even when their national teams lose the game.
To conclude, I believe that international sporting events play an irreplaceable role in contributing to world peace, for they remind us that we are actually one species, even if we speak another language, ook different, or are born in a faraway land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, as to, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23717948718 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82920426594 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8552233825 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.4 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145024232369 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554890518846 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469600345234 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968068192941 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024819976286 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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