Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
The world is facing serious problems related to environment such as global warming which have been generated by different developed nations. To protect our environment, the appropriate steps should be taken. The countries should start to adopt renewable sources and afforestation, and these are elaborated in detail in looming paragraphs.
To begin with, with increae in population the use of fossil fuels is also growing rapidly and pose threat to environment as these are not clean source of energy and pollute environment by emitting harmful gases. The use of non-renewable sources of energy can be discouraged by providing other means of energy such as solar, wind, and hydroelectricity. For example, countries like Denmark, Germany are already utilizing renewable energy sources and playing an significant role to sustain environment. Therefore, if nations adopt environment-friendly sources, the effect of global warming can be reduced at great extent.
Furthermore, the deforestation is the main factor which is responsible for escalating the global warming so by planting more and more trees the impact of global warming can be reduced. As afforestation helps to rebuild natural habitats and ecosystems, and maintain the balance in the environment by absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen. For instance, many nations are adopting reforestion to mitigate the difficulties related climate change. Hence, afforestation is the key element to conserve our environment.
To conclude, the world is facing serious issue as various nations participated in pollute the environment and the major cause is rise in global temperature. The crucial factors which can help to save the environment are utilization of renewable sources and afforestation. By adopting these techniques, the effect of global warming can be lowered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ng renewable energy sources and playing an significant role to sustain environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66304347826 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24903448085 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1176137837 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283430040629 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984401903903 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955951058039 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183824849759 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353826596748 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.