“Techcorporation is our top pick for investment this term. We urge all of our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed satellite technology has been approved by the FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. That company is Techcorporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not a monopoly. Thus, the new venture of Techcorporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the advice and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the advice.
The argument provided by the author that strongly suggest to invest in Techcorporation may seem reasonable at a first glance. However, the evidence about its success and its future profits are weak and unprovable. Therefore, his thesis is fundamentally flawed and some more questions should be asked to the author in order to understand and to adjust the flawest points of his reasoning.
Firstly, he argues that Techcorporation is their top investiment during the last term. However, he has not provided any information about the reasons that made this company gain such a fundamental role. Thus, it is not clear why he is appreciating it that much, if beacuse of his general passion for satellites or because of some economics concerns. Investors would be far more interested on having information about the latter rather than the former so this question strongly need to be answered to strenghten the affidability of his argument.
Secondly, the writer provided evidence by quoting a survey that has be done about the satisfation rate on the current satellite provider. However, there is a lack of information about the population included in the research, which, to provide some trustable results, need to be geographically distributed. For instance, if just a small town with a poor satellite signal has been interviwed the data would reflect just partially the reality. For this reason, more information about the population analyzed with the survey should be asked to the author, so that every doubt can be flawed.
In conclusion, the author of the article has supported a thesis that is not well supported beause of the lack of deep evidence. However, by replying to some additional questions concerning the population and the affidability of the survey and the real reason because he considers Techcorporation a top investiment it could be well-reasoned to reach his conclusion that the company is a profitable investiment.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 312 350
No. of Characters: 1589 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.093 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.017 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.19 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.577 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest investing'.
Suggestion: suggest investing
...nt provided by the author that strongly suggest to invest in Techcorporation may seem reasonable ...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...d evidence by quoting a survey that has be done about the satisfation rate on the ...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the article has supported a thesis that is not well supported beause of the lack...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 312.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09632637413 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5966370863 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133202484207 0.218282227539 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499697134759 0.0743258471296 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038234878938 0.0701772020484 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793703158882 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318375450638 0.0628817314937 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.3550499002 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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