The brick manufacturing process
The process diagram indicates the various steps that are followed by the building industry in order to produce bricks.
First of all, the digger is used to extract pure clay from the earth. Then, clay is turned into metal grid which is inserted into the roller. Following that, sand and water are blended with the mixture. The next step is either to put the mixture in the mould or to insert the mixture into the wire cutter. Both machines result in the production of bricks. Then, the bricks are inserted into the drying oven,, for the next 24 to 48 hours. After that, they are put into different kilns, to be heated in various temperatures each time; first in a moderate heat at about 200°C to 980°C and then at higher levels from 870°C to 1300°C. Before the packaging procedure, thebricks remain into the cooling chamber until 48 to 72 hours. Finally the bricks are packed into large packets which are distributed all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...bricks are inserted into the drying oven,, for the next 24 to 48 hours. After that...
^^
Line 4, column 727, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...e cooling chamber until 48 to 72 hours. Finally the bricks are packed into large packet...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69879518072 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19680550347 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.181628348 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075412494726 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295968645358 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452099573562 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729651432872 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025691071832 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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