Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this issue?
In many countries around the world, youngsters often move to the charm of cities from their rural settings; leaving their elderly behind. In this essay, I am going to discuss some of the consequences of these decisions and share some solutions towards it.
To start with, as the young members of the family exile toward urban areas, the old people left behind with no one to look after. This can be a major issue, as their age inclines, they need someone to look after their daily requirements. For instance, an old age couple might need daily ration and medics to mitigate their treatment: if they are suffering from any chronic illness. One plausible solution of it can be that their children ought to appoint a maid or a nurse, who can take care of their needs. Furthermore, that appointed person may also help them in their household activities.
Another problem that many parents might raise that their connection with their young ones have been worsen with time. This is because, for a long period of time, they were lived together and have compassion towards each other in their tough times. Since, the children have moved out of the countryside, they perhaps miss their presence between them. To solve this problem, youngsters should visit their elderly and keep in touch with them through various technology. One example could be that if for a vacation the children visits their countryside or once in a while the elderly visit to the cities, than the bonding between the family will perhaps remain strong.
To conclude, I would say, that while moving out of the countryside may be the necessity of many youngsters but it is also vital to take care of their old family members who left behind by providing them facilities such as a maid or visiting to them during holidays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83116883117 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41544476625 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1688482482 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142285278345 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543672717909 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309090400514 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895048808118 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183162755753 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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