Some people think that children should be sent to nursery school before they go the primary school, while others think it is better if they stay at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some people argue that kids should be sent to kindergarten before they attend primary school, whereas other people believe that if it remains at home that might be more valuable. In this essay, I will put the lights on the advantages and disadvantages of children's initial years of childhood in school.
According to the research, during the early stages of childhood, children are fast learners. This psychological advantage helps the children to learn basic academics and assist them to express themselves through other extra curricular activities. For instance, in institution kids learn to write simple language alphabets, simple mathematics, numbers and paint the figures which thrive their academic performance. In addition, kids who have a shy nature would be beneficial after having interaction with peers. Consequently, attending the nursery classes may bring positive outcomes in the development of pupils and be helpful in further career perspectives.
On the other hand, early admissions to the academy create a gap between parents and children. This gap seems to decrease emotional attachment with parents and early mental fear in the minds of kids. Furthermore, initial studies might be a burden on pupils which affect their physical growth and increase mental pressure. For example, some studies have shown that due to competition in schools, the school curriculum becomes comprehensive, which is difficult for little kids to understand as well as leaving no time for other physical activities.
Overall, it seems advisable that admission at the age of 4 to 6 years might be more favourable for the development of children in academic performance and to gain confidence who have introverts nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52830188679 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09195950801 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.850650912 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196462710977 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771425150781 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100154535178 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133833988577 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123412069317 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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