A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him in his country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter request advice about a gift for his/her family, ask about activities and clothing and find out about the food. Write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
I am very delight full to receive an invitation letter from you. I still cherish our friendship and I will never forget the time we have spent in a vibrant city Delhi of India. I am so excited to meet you again in your country England. Since, I have not been there before, so I would like to get some knowledge from you regarding that.
To begin with, I want you to give me advice for the gift that I can get for your family. I don’t have any idea about the weather will be like in London as I am planning to come in next month. Moreover, give me detailed information of the activities that we can perform and have some great fun as well as provide me some suggestions for the dresses that will be suitable and comfortable to wear. Apart from this, as you know I am vegetarian, so I want to make sure that appropriate food will be available for me to eat.
Please write me back as soon as possible so that I can get ready my air tickets and packing beforehand,
I cannot wait to see you again.
With love,
Susan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...spent in a vibrant city Delhi of India. I am so excited to meet you again in your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, apart from, you know, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24120603015 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35813892111 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6514737173 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244424672301 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981119446335 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628590226165 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135006617257 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778339721999 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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