The pictures below shows the recycling process wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at tge picture provides an illustration of how wasted glasses are recycled.
Overall,it is clear from the given data is that, there are three big stages starting with collecting the bottles and ending with sending them to supermarket. From the given process all steps are linked to each other respectively.
Looking at the information in more detail, the supplied process commences with gathering dissipated bottles in warehouse. Then,they are delivered to the next point by special transport. The process comes to the next stage in which the bottles are separated into three different sorts as green,brown and clear with the help of high-pressure water. And the bottles are transmitted to the factory that they broken to pieces. Afterwards, the pieces are burned in furnace under a temperature about 600-800c. In the next phasa, the recycled and new liquid glasses are shaped in a glass mould. Once,the final stage has been completed, the bottled drinks are dispatches.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , it
... wasted glasses are recycled. Overall,it is clear from the given data is that, t...
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Suggestion:
...ces with gathering dissipated bottles in warehouse. Then,they are delivered to th...
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Suggestion: , they
... dissipated bottles in warehouse. Then,they are delivered to the next point by spe...
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Suggestion:
...arehouse. Then,they are delivered to the next point by special transport. The pro...
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Suggestion: , brown
...ated into three different sorts as green,brown and clear with the help of high-pressur...
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Suggestion:
.... And the bottles are transmitted to the factory that they broken to pieces. Afte...
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Suggestion: , the
...lasses are shaped in a glass mould. Once,the final stage has been completed, the bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24050632911 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80178943438 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1051315787 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159528738803 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576372548323 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442978894696 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100477265984 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413882630728 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.