The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Saving nature has been becoming one of the most significant duties of humans in industrializing and revolutionizing world for several centuries. Some people opine that effectiveness of enhancing the price of petrol can be more efficient way to attain a good result ,while the rest of the people are opposed to this. In this essay, I will point out my sentiment before giving proven conclusion
First of all, miscellaneous types of transportation used for people's requirements ranging from private airplanes to water-carriages are refilled by fuel. When we utilize them, they excrete detrimental fume from them . As a result almost all people especially live in the city center are suffering from air pollution and also it affects dangerously for layer of course . In addition , it is argued that petroleum is reproduced before people use it. In the plants residue of petroleum are casted into the seas and rivers . This involves eliminating different kinds of fishes. In the same time it damage air and water.
Secondly, increasing the cost of fuel may adress some problems related to environment, however the host of people might face some kind of difficulties in this process. Giving an example, while the price of petrol change dramatically if people go to foreign countries, they have to pay expensive fare. World industry and agriculture are damaged efficiently . Businessmen who export their manufactured products is in a difficult situation and may collapse. As a result trade around the world might be lost its respectability.
In conclusion, it is believed that both sides of the assue have strong support . However, increasing the cost of fuel can not be upshot for environmental problems.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-02-21 | hoaithuongnguyen283 | 89 | view |
| 2024-02-21 | hoaithuongnguyen283 | 89 | view |
| 2024-02-20 | hoaithuongnguyen283 | 89 | view |
| 2024-02-20 | hoaithuongnguyen283 | 84 | view |
| 2024-02-20 | hoaithuongnguyen283 | 84 | view |
- It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead To what extend do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that music plays an important role in society Others think it is simply a form of entertainment Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- Central and local governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages while others believe that would be a waste of money Discuss both the 89
- The pie charts show sources which were used to generate electricity in Uzbekistan in 1980 and 1990 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Saving nature has been becoming one of the most significant dut...
^^
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the most significant duties of humans in industrializing and revolutionizing wor...
^^
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in industrializing and revolutionizing world for several centuries. Some peopl...
^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g and revolutionizing world for several centuries. Some people opine that effect...
^^
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re efficient way to attain a good result ,while the rest of the people are opposed...
^^
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entiment before giving proven conclusion First of all, miscellaneous types of tr...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving proven conclusion First of all, miscellaneous types of transportation u...
^^
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., miscellaneous types of transportation used for peoples requirements ranging fr...
^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uirements ranging from private airplanes to water-carriages are refilled by fuel....
^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... they excrete detrimental fume from them . As a result almost all people especiall...
^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople especially live in the city center are suffering from air pollution and als...
^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... affects dangerously for layer of course . In addition , it is argued that petrole...
^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rously for layer of course . In addition , it is argued that petroleum is reproduc...
^^
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'plants'' or 'plant's'?
Suggestion: plants'; plant's
...reproduced before people use it. In the plants residue of petroleum are casted into t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people use it. In the plants residue of petroleum are casted into the seas and r...
^^
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...leum are casted into the seas and rivers . This involves eliminating different ki...
^^
Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'damages'?
Suggestion: damages
...nt kinds of fishes. In the same time it damage air and water. Secondly, increasing...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me it damage air and water. Secondly, increasing the cost of fuel may adress s...
^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss some problems related to environment, however the host of people might face s...
^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nment, however the host of people might face some kind of difficulties in this p...
^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of petrol change dramatically if people go to foreign countries, they have to pa...
^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and agriculture are damaged efficiently . Businessmen who export their manufactur...
^^
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a difficult situation and may collapse. As a result trade around the world might ...
^^^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ficult situation and may collapse. As a result trade around the world might be l...
^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In conclusion, it is believed that both sides of the assue have strong supp...
^^^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h sides of the assue have strong support . However, increasing the cost of fuel c...
^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the assue have strong support . However, increasing the cost of fuel can not be u...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09300514032 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5920644779 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114796019414 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348096030163 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584700620858 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793813637385 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542912678072 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.