these days many families move abroad for work some people believe that this benefits the children in their families other believe that it make their lives more difficult discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people argue that foreign countries are the best place for job prospects for youngsters whereas other people contend that staying outside from the mother land is difficult for immigrants. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of migration of people in different countries.
On the one hand, youngsters are immigrating to other countries seeking for better job perspectives.In parent countries, due to absence of job opportunities and inadequate salaries for their work compel youngsters to move abroad. For example, in India unemployment figures are at dramatically rising, by which most of the Indians have been migrating to other countries to search for lucrative jobs. Furthermore, infrastructure in developed countries is one step ahead and offers high remuneration to skill workers as compared to developing countries. Consequently, satisfactory wages and a fine lifestyle are the attributes which attract the young generation towards abroad.
On the other hand, the unpleasant conditions of a new country may put newcomers into difficult situations. Firstly, the environmental conditions might be unadaptable for a foreigner, which may affect one's health mentally and physically. Secondly, sometimes the financial conditions of the young workers are not viable which develops difficult circumstances which may force immigrants into illegal activities. For instance, reports have shown that most immigrants are convicted in criminal activities to earn easy money and improve their economic state. The unfavourable settings make foreign workers difficult to adapt to in other countries.
Overall, it seems advisable that people should migrate to foreign countries for a better future if their parent country is unable to provide employment to their people and fails to provide infrastructure for public welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78545454545 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14002895181 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0202633134 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197578841473 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727277854793 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491091379378 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130610716352 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338227441408 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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