News is playing a vital role in our life today and people are getting much influenced by the news now. Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television news program. Do you agree?
Regardless of the dramatic impacts derived from news on people’s life, a group of individuals have argued that there is neither reason nor necessity to keep abreast of breaking news or sensational journalism. While I partially comply with this statement, I hold a belief that the assets of news are far from being unproductive.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons which provoke people to give their conclusion that updating news does not hold any connection with people’s life. The first reason is not to influence or connect with their life due to way too many headlines revolving around the prosperous celebrities. In fact, readers may be exposed to disturbance while looking for significant information, when those articles of the affluent’s lavish lifestyle perpetually popped out. Thus, a group of leaders come to conclude that reading news is futile and time-consuming. Another fact is one major disincentive of keeping up-to-date with the disturbing news is the commercial. This is to say that this commercial is irrelevant or not essential for readers to see, which mitigates the resident’s experiences that lead to readers reckoning the amount of time for updating news is extravagant.
On the contrary, it is unwarranted to condemn that reading news and watching programs do not hold any influence of citizen’s life. First and Foremost, taking their understanding even further is one of the main reasons for getting updated with the disturbing news. To be more specific, they can widen their critical thinking by reading news about events or social circumstances. In other words, the merits of reading news are to deliver current affair in terms of safety and precautions. For instance, in the event of the coronavirus outbreak, updating news of this contagious news has not only supported them raise higher perceptions and precautions, but also facilitated the authorities in the attempt to flattening the curl of death casualties.
For the reasons mentioned above, though keeping abreast of news still have some drawbacks, I concur with the idea of the news is of the essence in the modern era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in fact, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20348837209 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98975174017 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1088622019 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402445999936 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146475024015 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614290613788 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251869321509 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379106920087 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.