News is playing a vital role in our life today and people are getting much influenced by the news now. Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspaper and watch television news program.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt to claim that this form of information is part and parcel of having some impacts on people’s life. Apart from that, a group of individuals hold a belief that there is neither reason nor necessity to keep up-to-date with breaking news or sensational journalism. While I comply partially with this statement, I contend the assets of reading news is far from being productive.
On the one hand, there are few reasons to explain why some citizens are provoked to give their conclusion that disturbing news does not hold any connections in their life. Firstly, the social phenomenon of prosperous celebrities is also the main culprit of not influencing their life such as squandering their fortune over materialistic belongings, which is always splashed in all headlines in the sense that viewers rarely face the rigours of not looking for their necessary document via reading news. As a result, being wasted the amount of time is an inevitable thing with them when updating breaking news. However, one major disincentive of not affecting people in keeping the sensational news is the commercial. In the modern stage, almost the forms of information are often tagged with online advertising which has adverse implications on resident’s experience, which spurs an inevitable demand of reading news to be curbed gradually by virtue of extravagantly consuming their time.
On the other hand, it is unwarranted to condemn that reading news or watching the news does not hold any connections with the community. First and Foremost, taking spectator’s understanding even further is one of the main culprits of maintaining reading news. To be more specific, they can widen their critical thinking when engaging in their life by getting updated with events or social circumstances. Finally, the sole objective of news is to deliver essential things to them with a safety solution. For instance, in the event of the coronavirus outbreak, updating news from this event which supports them to have knowledge on how to take precautions or even flatten the curl of the death capsulitis.
For the reasons mentioned above, through the drawbacks of reading news still exists in life, I concur with the idea of the news is of the essence in the modern era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, still, while, apart from, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11859838275 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88203568928 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.088793355 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.642857143 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364743361213 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139023239911 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584540447469 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24166675408 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217962459846 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.