Some people believe that competitive sports are important in children’s study, whereas some believe that it is not useful as children feel that it is the only competition and winning. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are a lot of different viewpoints about the effects of competitive sports to children’s study. While some assume that they will support for youngster a lot in their study, I believe that sports are not more beneficial for educating children.
Sports competitions bring children a lot of benefits in their study. Firstly, athletic competitions will set good personality traits for children. As they train in a demanding environment, they have to obey training timetable strictly. Further, children can learn the way to cooperate with others. As a result, they will be more self-disciplined and know the importance of solidarity. Secondly, as we know, participating in sports is the way which helps youngsters be healthy. Playing sports supports the circulation of the blood that nourishes the body development. If children have a good health, they can concentrate on study better.
Contrary to the above judgment, I believe that there are some negative aspects of competitive sports affecting children’s study. Initially, some bad characters in sports will be applied into their study by children. Children tend to try to achieve something they want by all means as they are affected by competing for the sporting championship. The other situation is that they are more likely to fight with others. Besides, training may distract them from their education. Competitive competitions require athletes train strictly, and they have to spend more time practicing. Therefore, the more they train in sports, the less they concentrate on study. Last but not least, children can interrupt their study because of the trauma from sports activities. Children can find some pains from football such as bone fracture in foot, and these pains take children a lot of time to recover.
In conclusion, the benefits of participating in sports are noticeable, but I think that the disadvantages of this are more mentioned. In the following years, sports will be improved and developed in every age.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-29 | Phan Thị Thanh Thúy | 56 | view |
| 2019-04-24 | Divya Patel | 91 | view |
- International travel has become a very popular choice of tourists worldwide it also has some influences on the host country Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages 84
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 92
- Some people believe that competitive sports are important in children s study whereas some believe that it is not useful as children feel that it is the only competition and winning Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Other however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Many people want their country to host an international sporting event Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits Discuss both view and include your opinion supported by examples 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29652996845 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00878908376 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504731861199 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4513007032 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.9523809524 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0952380952 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266082901848 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913826134113 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811190297047 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171203636628 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809192363464 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.