Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The given article has claimed that due to the increase in recent global warming the Arctic deer population in Canada's arctic region has decreased. The author's argument is based on the fact that the local hunters have reported a decrease in Arctic deer's population combined with the recent increase in global warming. However, in order to better evaluate the author's argument following evidence is needed.
First of all, the evidence regarding the accuracy of the information provided by local hunters needs to be supplied. It is possible that the local hunters are providing lowering the actual numbers of the Arctic Deers for their selfish gains. Further, the local hunters may be extremely inexperienced and incompetent to actually determine the number of Artic deers in the area. If any of this is true it would significantly weaken the author's argument.
Secondly, the author needs to provide the effect of global warming on the sea ice of the regions in which these Arctic Deers live. The author has simply said that increase in global warming has "caused the sea ice to melt", it may be possible that the sea ice in Canada's Arctic region is relatively unaffected by the recent trends of global warming. Further, even if the increase in global warming has melted the ice in Canada's arctic region, it may be possible that the sea ice connecting different islands is still present for some part of the year enabling the migration of arctic deers. If this is indeed the case, the author's argument won't hold true.
Lastly, the author needs to show that all the rest of the conditions (apart from sea ice connecting the islands) required for Arctic Deer's survival are still the same as before. It is possible that the Arctic Deer's population is not decreasing because of the melting of the ice cap, instead it is decreasing due to the lack of food. If the amount of plants available for Arctic Deer's decreases, due to an increase in the population of other plant eating animals, it would cause their population to decrease. If the above-stated is true it would be a huge hit for the author's argument.
In conclusion, the author's argument, as it stands now, is extremely flawed as it is based on various unwarranted assumptions. The author needs to provide some or all of the above mentioned evidence in order to better evaluate the effect of increase in global warming in Arctic Deer's population and make his/her argument more robust.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 1996 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.787 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.523 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 161 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.766 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.392 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...anadas arctic region has decreased. The authors argument is based on the fact that the ...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'deers'' or 'deer's'?
Suggestion: deers'; deer's
...ters have reported a decrease in Arctic deers population combined with the recent inc...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...owever, in order to better evaluate the authors argument following evidence is needed. ...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the number of Artic deers in the area. If any of this is true it would significan...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... true it would significantly weaken the authors argument. Secondly, the author needs...
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Line 5, column 634, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... deers. If this is indeed the case, the authors argument wont hold true. Lastly, the...
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Line 7, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... is true it would be a huge hit for the authors argument. In conclusion, the authors...
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Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...authors argument. In conclusion, the authors argument, as it stands now, is extremel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, lastly, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, apart from, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 415.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92048192771 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60154380956 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404819277108 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6895019263 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.117647059 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.70786347227 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222851038568 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811799219716 0.0743258471296 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733820300255 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129555488903 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675053150472 0.0628817314937 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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