Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What the problems are associated with this problem?
What solutions can you suggest?
Andy:
Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What the problems are associated with this problem?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays an increasing number of people are dwelling in sedentary lifestyle in spite of widening scope and opportunities of gyms. There are a plethora of problems that it might stoke, hence , actions should be taken immediately. This essay explores the problems as well as solutions to this ominous trend.
First and foremost, this type of lifestyle might sow numerous health turmoils. For example , spending stretch of hours on sitting and vetoing exercise induce obesity, cardiovascular diseases and skeletal problems. In addition, it also stokes high blood pressure, as a consequence, shortening of life spans . From the mental perspectives, It might cause laziness,loss of enthusiasm towards life and faltering of memory. As a result, this kinda lifestyle serve as a catalyst for many scandals. Therefore, actions supposed to overcome this difficulty should be carried out as much as faster.
Social media is a pre-eminent way of tackling this problem. Tv and radio channels should spur people to live healthy by broadcasting programmes which depict the comparison between healthy and unhealthy lifestyle and impress the adverse sites of sedentary lifestyle. Another tackle is making gyms more affordable so that any class people can easily access to the facilities. Apart from that, people should inject their physical drilling process by adding music any activity that they love. As a result of this actions, society eschew the foul fate which this lifestyle might bring.
In conclusion, I reckon that societies should rescue their members from the negative sites of sedentary lifestyle. So taking actions as much as faster is the best way of bailing out people from these difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44745762712 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85835333287 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8829275218 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5789473684 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366613105347 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115044412419 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149907422057 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250974142596 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183454292935 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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