Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people argue that excellent finances are worthy despite of shortage of time. While the others believe that money cannot compensate the lack of free time. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion on the matter.
First, supporters of the opinion of making money no matter what might have insisted that the money could help to solve many issues and improve significantly the quality of a person’s life. Thus, a fortune may it feasible to have a good education, health care, quality food as well as own fashionable houses, cars and whatever. In addition, in terms of vacation, a better financial position lets individuals to spend their holidays in the best resorts of the world, while those who have free time with less currency would probably stay at home or purchase the cheapest holiday destinations.
Nevertheless, there is possible to make an opposite view that money cannot buy the time. It is too precious for being traded for money. At the end of the day, our happiness consists of time, which we spend with our beloved people rather than at work. As well as this, there is no money in the world, which can buy a smile on a child’s face when their parents are playing with them. In addition, having more time greatly contributes in a person’s development. For instance, they can attend foreign language classes or study arts that enriches their lives and makes it happier.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits. On the balance, however, I suppose that people should not prioritize the money over free time. Meanwhile, having enough funds for decent living is also important and we should pay attention to it as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are worthy despite of shortage of time. While the others believe that money cannot co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83050847458 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52050254219 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2933605303 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354852661804 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106254024178 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705974713873 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197209322921 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185490447972 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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