You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to seek help for the document which I forget at your home.
First of all, I would like to thank you for letting me stay at your during my business trip. Coming to the point, I forget my business-related important in the drawer next to the bed in the room, where I was staying. There is a blue-colored clear bag in the drawer with a red tag on it. It has three different sets of 20 papers each.
In the morning, when I about to leave for the airport, I don’t know how I skipped to pick those documents from the drawer. I realized it only when I board the flight and it was too late.
I would like to request you please send it by post because it is not feasible to be physically there for collecting the documents. These documents are quite important for my company. Please send them to my personal address.
I look forward to your immediate action.
Yours Truly,
Kinu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29834254144 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44818094496 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5036341495 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5714285714 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277611549919 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087576419233 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661767131518 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135854229557 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791159737672 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.