The graph below shows UK rain emissions measure in million of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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The graph below shows UK rain emissions, measure in million of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

The line graph illustrates the amount of rain gases released in UK from four different categories from 1990 to 2007

Overall, there was a downward trend in UK rain emissions from electricity, gas and water supply, domestic and other industries. While the amount of emissions from transport and communication tend to increase.

In 1990, around 3.3 million tonnes of gases produced from electricity, gas and water supply, compared to 0.75 million tonnes from transport and communication. After declined dramatically over the next 9 years, emissions from electricity, gas and water supply sector reached its lowest point at approximately 0.5 million tonnes in 2007. Whereas, the amount of gases from transport and communication leveled off until peaked at 1 million tonnes in 2005

Acid rain emissions from other two categories decreased over the period shown. Domestic was responsible for 0.6 million tonnes of gases in 1990, while other industries released 2 million tonnes. Gases from both domestic and other industries fell gradually to 0.2 million tonnes and 1.25 million tonnes respectively in 2007

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45930232558 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88228466671 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2652167554 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400096024291 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202049331264 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764784010102 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267328611538 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764603133905 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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