It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
There is no doubt that the trend of taking a year break after the completion of school and before starting the college courses has gain greater popularity. This trend may be beneficial for the student before entering tertiary education but there are also some identified drawbacks attached.
On the one hand, there is an undeniable upside to take a gap year. This is the time to recharge their battery or escape from the hustle and bustle of life. Completing a long academic journey with a reasonable score is not an easy task for many students. For those who have already passed it, they often feel tired and need a break. So this can help students get back with a fresh mind and continue their studies in tertiary education. Moreover, this is an opportunity for them to access many career sectors in society. during this time, they may be trying out various part-time jobs to enhance new skills and set up new relationships. In this way, students will have a better career orientation to choose their appropriate major and increase their employability in the future
One the other hand, The disadvantages seem to be more convincing than these benefits. This may stop the study of high school graduates. Most people making a lot of money from those part-time jobs during the break often intend to drop out. They are not aware of the significance and importance of going to college so they are missing the opportunity to apply for job having better income and a good work environment. This in part also affected the country's decline because of the lack of young talents. Furthermore, It also has many potential risks that can adversely affect the students themselves. Due to this break, they might fall victim of social evils that makes them criminal or meet with an accident while traveling and vacation somewhere. Their lives and personalities may be affected at any time without their knowledge
In conclusion, despite having a year gap can broaden the horizons of the students by providing them a better vision of the society and various cultures, It can also barter away their career and future even their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87569060773 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6036655323 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57182320442 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7679860216 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.823529412 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127507024767 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427336008178 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306286823779 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771611945601 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191383286614 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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