Negative effect of technology in our life
Technology has negatively affected our life which includes the dependence on electronic devices, musculoskeletal problems and employment opportunities. To begin with, people nowadays are more reliant on the mass media. A good illustration for this is the recent innovation of Facebook which provides an alternative for reading news and sending messages free of charge. Although this innovation helps communication easier, it is nowhere compared to the face-to-face meetings and it is a lack of feeling of closeness. More seriously, using mobile devices and computers is bad for humans’ posture. Using smartphones or laptops in a long time can lead to back and neck diseases, lower self-esteem and mood and decline assertiveness and productivity. The last consequence of technology is that it will replace humans with machines at various workplaces. For instance, the existence of dishwashers, washing machines and vacuum cleaners acts as a substitute for house maids causing difficulty in finding a job. Because of this, individuals have to depend on the government for their basic needs such as food, accomodation, and so on and thus the economy of the coultry. In a nutshell, technology has bad impact on our life in terms of communication, health and employment chances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42211055276 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27485551891 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3765347127 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166278605802 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067174627631 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119114292347 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166278605802 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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