Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Company should pay for employees to get university degree.
It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and progressive world where we live, education has been become one of the significant issue in any body’s life. In this respect, many individuals hold the opinion that companies should spend money on their employees for getting their degree in university, others stand at the other side of the continuum, believing that this matter is not the company duty and with this money could do many works for company’s aims. As far as I am concerned, this notion is a critical point and I totally agree with this statement. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated hereunder.
To begin with, many people for money issues, could not enter the universities and financial supporting of companies could help them to elevate themselves. It is crystal clear that all of the people in a country are not in the same level of wealth and many of whom do not have money for both studying and living. Hence, being in a university and educating for a better life and being more knowledgeable is a dream for many youths, so companies with this humanistic approach will be given great opportunities to them to achieve it. In this goal, the companies have long-lasting desires which do not determine to a company but this is for the whole of society and will transfer this message to its employees that you are important for us.
Moreover, companies with spending money on their employees’ education, indeed investment in their success. To put it in other words, an employee who is more educated and is related to the newest and foremost sciences, could be more efficient and working with better quality. As an illustration, a company with uneducated people who have old fashioned thinking style never could be prosperous in a competing market in front of its’ rivals. Studying in a university will raise the employees’ confidence and they achieve to see an issue with different sides and angles also improve socialize abilities which all of them are necessary for an employee to bring success into his workplace.
As a result, having considered the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, a company with the decision for funding the university of the employees, first of all, helps for a better social condition, and secondly, when an employee improves will affect to company’s success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1373.03311258 143% => OK
No of words: 392.0 270.72406181 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00255102041 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85309365949 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 145.348785872 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525510204082 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7252542201 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.846153846 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31526912354 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108013896636 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067192662501 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195355115836 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253569877162 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.3589403974 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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