Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
describe the gift
tell how it will be delivered
explain why you chose it.
Dear Aron!
I hope you are doing great and enjoying your new adobe. When I received your letter yesterday and got to know that you finally were able to relocate, I was on cloud nine. I shared this news with Susy as well, she is excited that you got your dream apartment after months of the struggle of searching and running after the agents.
I and Susy were discussing and the gift that we wanted to get for you and after a fruitful discussion we came to the point where we both agreed that the one thing you would really like is the painting that you loved in the Art Gallery we visited last month. To be honest, we both were really impressed by your choice when you interpreted the artist’s sentiments and decipher the painting for us. It is indeed a true representation of modern society and the dilemma we live in. We reached out to the center and inquired about the painting. You shared that you will get this painting the next month and when the good news arrives we new what to present to you.
We have requested to send the painting to your new address that you shared in your letter and hopefully, this will be delivered to your place in the next 5 days. I am also sharing the TCS number that you can use to track your order.
Once again, congratulations my friend to get your own apartment.
Lots of love from you and your family.
Warm wishes
Saar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: I_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knew' (past of "to know")?
Suggestion: knew
...month and when the good news arrives we new what to present to you. We have reque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38039215686 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31217628427 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7658299667 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9230769231 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353861595663 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133974682553 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853882756313 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214655482788 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614906559171 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.