Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Give your opinion.
Children are future of the society, and they should be taught well for a prosperous society. School acts as a foundation for the children for the overall development. In this essay, I put forth the reasons for children should be taught at school.
In my opinion, children should be sent to school because it will improve their social skills. Social skills are becoming increasingly necessary for different job roles be it a leader in an organization, social media marketing specialist, social media strategist and while working along with people in an organization. children will hone these skills when they interact with other people and converse on different topics. Children can improve their skills when they are participating in competitions such as writing and speaking. As social skills are very important and school is a better place to acquire those, children should be sent to school for overall development.
Children get opportunity to involve in sports apart from education and eventually can pick sport as their career choice. Schools have good infrastructure for different sports along with good instructors. Children can choose a sport of their choice and can excel in that sport, which may eventually lead them to be part of the school team. Athletes who are now participating at world stage did not become successful in a year or two. Some of the athletes picked sport of their choice while at school and started practicing from then and with their dedication to the sport they are able to achieve great heights. Since sports are increasingly becoming a career choice for many people, it is wise to send children to school and encouraging them to pick a sport.
School is a great platform for children to get themselves involved in practical work which makes them to understand things better. Theoretical knowledge can be attained from reading but to know deeper insights of the subject doing experiments is the only way. With schools having labs for different fields of science, children can use labs to perform different experiments and can learn new things. For example, children can learn about viscosity of a liquid from a book but performing an experiment gives him a chance to find out viscosities of different liquids, also he will know the procedure behind to determine viscosity of the liquid. Children can have better understanding of the subject by learning them while doing and school is a good facility for them.
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- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Give your opinion 73
- Subjects such as Art Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology Many people children suffer as a result of these changes To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subj 73
- Studies show that, as we’ve become more technically advanced, our health has deteriorated rapidly. Heart disease, cancer, diabetes, and virtually every major ailment are far more common today than they were thirty years ago. The primary reason for this 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06930693069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77684824714 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4810644764 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.789473684 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295602392834 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113703841353 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663130127899 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199322127138 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052667350408 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.