Email is a fast and convenient way to communicate, and written letters aren't needed anymore.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Since the beginning of medieval ages folks have maintained contacts with closed circle to verify hallmark events and well-being. An opinion exists that with new technologies invention and gadgets vast distribution handwritten notes became less justified. Although I believe that message written in hand creates romantic and arty atmosphere, the fast and effective data transition cannot be executed better than using simplistic web transfer.
On the one hand, briefs formed in pencils or other registry have unparalleled vibe, energy and even special scent that would not be forgotten after decades. The moment a human being decides to unfold a paper and a feather it speaks volumes about presumed content and the recipient importance. Sender is scrupulously form calligraphic symbols to express in-dept thoughts and confessions to impress the receiver to the very core. For example, my grandmother has stocked historical envelopes that her husband used to send her daily from various locations in war times and she would reread them occasionally to reminiscence. Thus, the emotions arisen trembling (rubbing) either the long-awaited or the unexpected package with handmade note will live forever in the memory.
On the other hand, nothing can beat the effectiveness and promptness of eligible internet based options for transferring epistle securely. In the matter of several minutes individuals even with entry-level skills are able to organize a statement and deliver it to recipient through enormous online options. Moreover, the service of messages conveyance in majority of cases is free of charge and is available to myriad of nations due to vast intranet penetration. For instance, my father manages to reach his first cousin who immigrated to Argentina in 1998 through electronic mail almost instantly adding the feature of video broadcasting as well (as a bonus). Hence, new technology capabilities simplifies our communications with outer world on the massive scale, making it flawless, comfortable and user-friendly.
Taking into account all mentioned above, I’m convinced that though written letters might create trail of fairytale and feeling of mystery, web alternatives make it easier for adults to collaborate in the hectic times of never ending bulletins and events.
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- IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Sample 2 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarize the information by selecting and reporti 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...-being. An opinion exists that with new technologies invention and gadgets vast distribution...
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Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'formed'.
Suggestion: formed
...ient importance. Sender is scrupulously form calligraphic symbols to express in-dept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5558739255 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94401975561 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713467048711 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3071361649 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0763498180888 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217372065459 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234694062395 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436690478538 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199463971791 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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