Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Time plays an essential role in our life. Either you run the day or day runs you. Altough some people would harbor the view that a job with five working days for shorter hours is better, I believe that we should have a job where we can work only three days a week for long hours. I had a firm belief to have a job with less working days in a week but long hours for several reasons, and would develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, if we get an opportunity to work only three days a week for long hours, we can plan to spend remaining time either with our family, friends or can complete our personal tasks such as banking transactions, a payment of internet bills, visiting children's schools, etc. As a result, we can create a balance between work and personal life. I must say that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by own experience. For example, after I attended my bachelor in Mechanical and Autnomation Engineer, I joined a small automobile company. In this organization, I used to work five days with 8 hours. Thus, I needed to start in the morning at 08:00 AM to reach office at 09:00 AM. After completing the job of 8 hours, I reached home at around 18:00 PM. Consequently, I spent my whole day working for my organization. Afterward, around five years later, I joined a German mulinational company, where I devoted 11 hours a day but, I need to go only three days a week. Due to this change in working days, I could plan my remaning days for personal things. As we can see from this example, with less working days in a week, we can create a balance between a work and a personal life.
Secondly, less working days in a week help in pursuing part-time job. Nowadays, with increased personal demands, it is arduous task to manage a family with a limited amount of money. Accordingly, an individual can look for a part-time job such as working as a waiter in a hotel, a real estate agent, a part-time teacher, etc. These referred jobs enable a person to provide a comfortable life to his family. Drawing from my brother's experience, he is working for a financing firm, that opens only for three days a week to support their customers. Whereas, balance days, employees can opt for other job options. Hence, my brother is working as a real estate agent along with aforementioned job in financing firm. For this reason, less working days enable a person to earn additional income.
In view of the reasons mentioned, I would firmly support for a job with less working days a week for long hours. This is because we can balance our work and personal life, and earn additional income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54507337526 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63942881687 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46750524109 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1170179886 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.72 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.08 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429501782705 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134451964475 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111595844374 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323155614128 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111682946761 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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