Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern era, E-learning is becoming widely popular worldwide. It has been suggested that there is no need of school because Pupils can get access to knowledge from E-learning by staying at home. I personally believe it is entirely a negative trend and in this essay i will give some arguments to support my opinion.
Generally speaking, there are some reasons why i believe that schools play an important role in student's life. Perhaps the main reason behind this idea is that teachers can keep an eye on every movement and activity of the students in the class, while it is almost impossible in case of internet-based learning because students get distracted from phone calls, social apps while learning through internet. Another key argument in support of this idea is that students can develop team work skills along with academics. For example, quiz competitions, debates and plays are conducted in schools on regular basis which help them to learn team learning and this skill is very useful to them when they start working.
Last but not least, school goers also get opportunity to learn valuable social skills from their class teachers and peers. In other words, Students become able to learn how to behave and deal with the society in addition to academics. Schools and educational institutions start teaching good etiquettes, manners and habits from nursery which in turn assists students to become a well-civilised person after being graduated.
In conclusion, no doubt, internet-based learning has become need of the day; however, in my opinion, there is no replacement for educational institutions because students learn lot many other skills from schools along with studies that seem hard in e-learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rely a negative trend and in this essay i will give some arguments to support my ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly speaking, there are some reasons why i believe that schools play an important ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
... regular basis which help them to learn team learning and this skill is very useful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17921146953 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72758208163 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4172893929 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.363636364 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197806665454 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784138553279 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589366590597 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129033594461 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302712123583 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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