You need to take some time off from your job and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be done while you are away
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ………………….
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request several days off due to family circumstances. With the work on a deal with Microsoft Corporation going, I would not have done such a request if not the death of my sister-in-law.
Recently, my brother's wife Emily had a car accident that put her in a hospital. For few days, she has been in reanimation, and we were hoping that her condition would improve. Unfortunately, Emily had a stroke and died last night.
Now, my family is organizing a funeral, and this is extremely hard for everybody. I am asking your permission to take 2-3 days to attend the funeral and support my brother. Because of the tragedy, he is broken and miserable, so I am afraid for his mental health.
I will appreciate it if you allow me to be away from work during the following couple of days. To make sure that the presentation I am supposed to prepare by the end of the week will be ready, I have asked my colleague Janine to help me out and given her access to all my materials.
Thank you for the consideration of my request and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jane Black.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51690821256 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77958773211 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9376351285 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147421624301 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558644576953 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593621475056 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689884432422 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382102657042 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.