Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is no longer uncommon in many parts of the world that more students graduated from college. There are concerns about how this trend impacts on the job market because too many young people graduated from the college might confront the problem of unemployment. This essay will argue, however, that studying in college is highly valuable for young people in terms of national development.
First of all, the purposes of university education are that training students have their independent thinking skill, teamwork skill, and leadership skill. Working closely with their classmates and taking part in group discussions for reports which can improve them become more creative; when they enter the job market, the company has more chances to get a good employee, facilitating the company development and innovation.
It might be claimed that the job market is insufficient for young people who graduated from college. In fact, there are too many young people never thought about their career plan, just follow the trend with their friends; admittedly, it could cause overburdened on society. Nevertheless, if young people can well-defined career paths, choosing career paths that really interest them, the university can provide a variety of curriculum about academic subjects for students, they can not only achieve their potential and their goals, but also prepare them for employment. Furthermore, the more elites can make our country development become stronger.
By the way of conclusion, while the study in college is not suitable for every young people, it can indeed provide them a good environment to learn about what they want and boost their potential. I believe that broadening young people's skills and knowledge is a crucial role to play in future careers and national competitiveness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...can well-defined career paths, choosing career paths that really interest them, the un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, well, while, in fact, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36971830986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73465085786 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0795913781 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201298315989 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835959860425 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423211411648 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12015688834 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409611250331 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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