Many people think that to become a successful specialist it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Since people have created different jobs and careers way it has commenced to be so crucial to choose the most suitable for each person. However, enormous number of humans believes that to become a splendid specialist it is more beneficial to opt a route of life in childhood and never amend it afterwards. I totally agree with this statement and believe that a person who has selected their future at young age would be more successful than others.
Firstly, such a person will have much better skills than anyone else who has chosen this area in a later period. It means that this person will surpass any other individual in knowledge and skills due to the fact that they had much more practice. Therefore, such a human will have an advantage among competitors in the field that they have opted. For example, my friend Ilya chose his area of activity when he was in adolescence and now he works in a large international company and he is a Deputy Director there, and his classmates work at unloved jobs in the office for a low remuneration. Thus, choosing a profession at a young age is the best way to secure a perfect future.
Secondly, salaries for such persons are higher in compares with other humans. In other words, most companies want to hire them while ordinary people need to achieve a lot to obtain this job. Likewise, such individuals are very sociable and easy to communicate with which makes them the most competent specialists in their field and provides excellent career growth. For example, scientists from Oxford conducted a study and found that such people gain financial independence in life much faster than humans who did not choose their profession after 16 years. Hence, the salaries of these employees are much higher which means that their life will be better compared ones who were slow at thinking about their profession.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the statement and believe that a person who has chosen an occupation at young age will reach the heights of career growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8242074928 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54684617386 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4093590022 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171651341005 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599107593701 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348448975475 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109401036765 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492897198126 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.