Some people think that going to libraries nowadays is not necessary as everyone has internet, while other people believe that libraries can't be replaced by the internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this world of globalization, every person has an easy access to the internet. Despite this, while a group of people think libraries are more prime than internet, other disagree. In this essay, I will write on this conundrum and will give my own notion.
On the other hand, the idea that says libraries are no longer vital to the society. One, they said, why we go far from our home while we can study at home. For instance, they can download everything and anything in their mobile phones or laptop and read whatever and whenever they want. Second, what’s the point to carry heavy books and strolling around whole books for a particular topic, when you can go to a specific page by just one click. But, there is also a dark side of using internet as books may be copyright, not up to date or any other reading material might be a wrong information.
On the other hand, what are the reasons for censorship of the above idea. Well, first, libraries are not just only the place of getting books or reading, it is also a meeting place of varied mind who can discuss various topics and understanding them. Therefore, a sense of commuting environment build up. Second, books contained all the information in its original form, cannot be altered by anyone else unlike internet. Third, libraries always have up to date versions of all books and researches so that people or student can get all the latest information. Furthermore, elderly people who are retired or anyone which are keen to read books to spend time have freedom to go a place, where they can relax and study of his/her interest.
To conclude, in my view, libraries are always a crucial part for our students, teachers or any person and a source of novel researches that are recently be done and cannot get by any other means. In spite of technology gain more development day by day but it could not met the whole benefits of libraries as they can spread harmful or wrong information to pupils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...orld of globalization, every person has an easy access to the internet. Despite this, while a ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more development day by day but it could not met the whole benefits of libraries ...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'meet'
Suggestion: meet
...evelopment day by day but it could not met the whole benefits of libraries as they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, for instance, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63896848138 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5117714508 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570200573066 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4384669374 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267074018216 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080788246891 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661439287727 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155185065178 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282736402591 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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