Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. One of the advantages is that there is an increase in the number of people who purchase things such as books, clothes, and even groceries online. In my opinion, the benefits of online shopping outweigh its drawbacks.
First of all, a positive aspect is that it allows people to save time and enjoy their pastimes with their loved ones, which is much more convenient. For example, a person who has a heavy workload at work would prefer to get home than going shopping after finishing their work. So, a solution to this problem is shopping online. People can buy their essentials during lunch-time by spending a few minutes. Moreover, we can make a price comparison between the products on different sites. Therefore, internet shopping offers buyers the best prices since it gives discounts to them when they order items online.
Secondly, there is no restriction for shoppers to order goods from different countries. Some people want to have a diverse variety of or quality products made in foreign countries so that they do internet shopping. However, some people think that online shopping is expensive. Yet, more products you buy, less money you will pay for shipping.
Admittedly, not all products on the Internet are reliable and good looking. For instance, online shoppers can’t know how the products would look and whether it would fit them if they don’t know their right size when they search for clothes or shoes. Nevertheless, this problem is solvable because there are size guides and information about materials and how to take care of the products. All we need to do is do some researches on the shopping site.
To conclude, I would like to restate my position that there are many advantages of e-shopping, such as being time-efficient and offering comparable prices. Though, there are disadvantages too as everything has two sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65636029183 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3494646696 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7368421053 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191794233726 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537595250158 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367067498459 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100718862053 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325554940858 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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