Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, more and more people tend to use plant-based foods in everyday life, especially adolescents. They think that eating vegetables is ecologically sustainable and reduces damage to the environment. However, I strongly believe that it is not vital for everyone to be a vegetarian.
It is considered by some people that eating animal products can be high in saturated fat and cholesterol so they have been linked to severe illnesses such as cardiovascular disease and diabetes. Obviously, a high intake of meat could not be a good choice for health. Unfortunately, nothing can replace the rich source of protein which helps to build muscles and strong bone, but meat. Taking supplements to get all the essential vitamins and minerals may result in being considerably unprofitable for those who chose a green solution.
Moreover, it is scientifically proven that some plants such as corn and tomato are genetically altered in order to be grown quickly and be more resistant to the cold weather because of the need, and some fruits are covered with chemicals to stay longer on the shelves or being protected from insects. These problems can cause serious consequences to human body.
On the other hand, people who are struggling with serious health problems must choose a healthy lifestyle, and this can easily be found in becoming a user of plan-based meals. Furthermore, many animals are being killed in daily basis to make food for human beings, so some individuals say that animals must be treated equally as humans.
In conclusion, there are undeniable aspects of having a vegetarian diet. In my opinion, a balanced diet of meat and vegetables should result in a healthy body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...iduals say that animals must be treated equally as humans. In conclusion, there are unde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09318996416 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90536670477 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2973859978 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160275105238 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624864967061 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055666210119 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833218662778 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00958571290793 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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