In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries, employees are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time.
Considering the needs of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have?
Some people argue that paid leaves should be given to the employees annually for four-six weeks, while others argue that it should be for two weeks. This essay argues that a long duration of off-time would cost the employer, while in my opine, two weeks off time is adequate to energize.
On the one hand, paid leaves are an expense to the company because the staff receives a salary without offering any service for the given period time. Therefore, company costs increase with every non-working days. Moreover, the employer has to ensure for short term replacement from the existing workforce and also have to provide him training and additional allowances for added responsibilities which further adds to the cost. For example, Malaysia has the highest number of holidays apart from the annual leaves, so thereby giving more than two weeks of leave become impractical and infeasible for company.
On the other hand, short breaks are quite essential as it helps to revitalize. In other words, breaks help the staff to have a clearer mind to start fresh with a greater concentration that improves their performances. For instance, I have always opted for a few days off before taking up the next bucket of work. I believe, off days are directly proportional to efficiency, so thereby having a proper balance of work and holidays reduce the stress.
In conclusion, although six-weeks leave is an employee dream, but would cost company fortunes have a detrimental effect on their business. Consequently, two-weeks paid off is more viable as it improves their productivity at work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10344827586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71686685566 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.552092473 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176887434477 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622317202863 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600453867405 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119113520368 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770813613128 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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