Some people say politicians promote the development of society. However, others believe that, it is Scientists, who have more influence on the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Politicians guide and enforce the development of the nation, while scientists and researchers improve our standard of living. In my opinion, both scientists and politician are necessary for the progress a country.
People who are diplomatic, wise and charismatic indulged in politics are considered as true politicians. They are crucial in leading our society to a systematic and progressive way. Thanks to honest politicians, now we have regulations to maintain the social harmony and works for the good of the country. Their political proposal of tax and other developmental programs can influenc...
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