Technologies have developed very fast in the past 100 years. However some people think that technological process has brought negative effects on the humanity. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is often argued that technologies have experienced a significant development for about a century. Nevertheless, some people believe in the adverse impact which technological advancement has caused for the humanity. Despite that, this essay completely disagrees with the aforementioned idea. it will first demonstrate the benefits of technology for medical treatment, followed by the explanation of that for companies.
First and foremost, technology is the effective method for medical treatment. this is put down to the fact that advanced technologies are able to deal with harmful diseases such as rubella and malaria, which were fatal and incurable diseases hundreds of years ago, hence there are more people who can be saved. For instance, according to research from Monash University in 2017, the mortality rate by disease has witnessed a noticeable decrease since 14th century, thanks to technologies for medical treatment. without the advancement of medical technology, people are more likely to suffer from death by pandemics, like the black death in 14th century and Spanish flu in 1920s.
In addition, a lot of companies can gain benefits from technologies. this is because machines are likely to work in unlimited time without exhaustion, whereas humans need periods of time for rest or vacation, therefore the companies can increase profit and productivity. Although these technologies need maintenance, the maintenance fee may be lower than the salary paid for employees. thanks to the aforementioned reasons, in renowned companies such as Apple and Samsung, the technologies have replaced humans in many sections.
In conclusion, the evolution of technology has provided a wide range of advantages for the humanity, especially from health and business perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61992619926 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14383781076 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1604526088 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186711968696 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736428111897 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427515468248 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112468018419 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048271527045 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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