Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading or doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In modern era, since people engage themselves with busy lifestyle, there has been a deficiency in spare time using for entertainment. Whether leisure time should be used for mind-boosting activities or relaxation is a prevalent topic. Pondering this issue, I hold strong interest that sufficient restoration is a more advantageous choice.
Intelligence-stimulating activities engender long-term impacts on people’s nervous system. Taking up brain-fostering hobbies is liable to trigger analyzing and intellectual skills which establish a far more flexible thinking pattern and cognitive skills. For instance, those devoting their free time to playing chess or puzzles hold a more superior and higher academic repertoire than the entire ones. Moreover, many studies have shown that keeping brain actively through reading or playing chess is conducive for preventing brain from losing power and reducing the process of Alzheimer’s disease as well as distracting people from daily tension.
However, proper resting also have a positive influence on people’s productivity. While keeping themselves out of discursive thoughts and heavy burden, people are liable to become less prone to mental diseases such as insomnia, sleep loss and deficiency in restoring energy which are significant contributors to jeopardize both mental and physical health and inevitably deteriorate one’s work efficiency and productivity. Therefore, people had better take more sufficient rest by doing meditation or more proper sleep in order to enhance concentration at work or while studying.
In conclusion, relaxing engenders a higher chance of avoiding detrimental effects of tension and is advantageous to effective productivity. Nevertheless, brain-stimulating hobbies are capable of establishing a more intelligent thinking pattern. Therefore, people should balance between these hobbies and relaxation so as to properly use their free time.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ce between these hobbies and relaxation so as to properly use their free time.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0036101083 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36385002246 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664259927798 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5035651037 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222656204811 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763964508122 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637981723281 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130040621593 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530445290848 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.52 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ce between these hobbies and relaxation so as to properly use their free time.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0036101083 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36385002246 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664259927798 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5035651037 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222656204811 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763964508122 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637981723281 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130040621593 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530445290848 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.52 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.