Some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government’s primary role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the development of economy and industry, environmental issue has become more severe than the past. Someone declare that everybody has the duty to protect the environment, while others insist that our government should tackle the problem. In my own perspective, both views are equally important.
On the one hand, everyone has the responsibility to protect the environment, because it is protecting the place that we are living in. For instance, people should never throw any garbage on the streets, otherwise it would result in a dirty and disgusting environment. Apart from that, plenty of natural scenes and habitats of wild animals might be ruined if people do not preserve the environment. For example, in recent years, there are more and more news and reports focusing on the fact that large amounts of natural tourist attractions and animal habitats are damaged because of the trash generated by visitors.
On the other hand, government plays a significant role in environmental conservation as they handle the technologies and equipment to dispose garbage, which is the task an individual can never do. They collect trash from residents, recycle and dispose them according to different categories as their regular duty to protect of environmental protection. In addition, government could raise public awareness of environmental issue by broadcasting relative contents on TV channels or social media, since some people may not pay much attention to environmental problems. Moreover, government could even announce law to restrict waste disposal of companies by rising the tax revenue, which is an effective way to control the source of pollution.
To sum up, both individuals and government have their responsibilities to preserve the environment and there is no conflict between their roles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'declares'.
Suggestion: declares
...come more severe than the past. Someone declare that everybody has the duty to protect ...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'declares'.
Suggestion: declares
...come more severe than the past. Someone declare that everybody has the duty to protect ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43262411348 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0661109186 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1263967358 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179182438637 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639033383996 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503671862661 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112760498866 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335056019683 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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