The pie charts below show the percentages of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts depict the proportion of utilised water in six various sectors around the world.
Overall, in all six nations, the investment of water in the usage of agriculture accounted for the highest percentages as compared to that of other categories. While the utilisation of water in domestic use of all countries saw a minimal surge, opposite trend can be observed in the industrial uses of water.
To begin with, water used by domestic sectors in North America and South America comprised for a minor margin of proportion, nevertheless there was a vast difference in the percentages of agriculture use and industrial use of water. Besides this, in Europe, industrial department consumed a higher water which was 19% and 38% higher than other to usage of water.
Secondly, in Central Asia, the proportion of water used by agriculture experienced a 4% rise in comparison of Africa. However, it had experienced a downfall of 3% after in south-east Asia, but it remained to the highest percentages all-time in accordance of all sectors.
Thirdly, there was a 2% plunge of water used in domestic area in Central Asia as compared to the proportion of water in Africa which was 9%. On the other hand, in both the nations Africa and Central Asia, the water used by domestic phase was 2% greater than industrial area which was 7% and 5% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reater than industrial area which was 7% and 5% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9519650655 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8908956575 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480349344978 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1225622869 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 5.23603664747 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307557847503 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13952545021 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072651498286 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181382703984 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654006228757 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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