Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern digital world, kids spend a considerable amount of time on viewing television and playing video games. However, it is thought by some people that these entertainment pastime is having adverse effect on children's mental well being. In my opinion, I absolutely agree with this statement and believe that these amusement media could result in aggression, depression and other mental issues in children.
To commence with, these days, children watch television programmes and play digital games on console, mobile phones, laptop or various other electronic devices instead of any physical activities such as running, swimming and lots others. This, then, consequently results in numerous serious mental health illnesses. The most dangerous effect is that kids gets addiction of video games especially, violent games and spend a massive amount of time could eventually, last in adoption of an aggressive behaviour. For example, different kinds of online or offline video games are available to play and majority of those are utterly full of pulse pounding, incredible violence namely resident evil, dead by daylight etc. Continuous playing these games by children, negatively affect their mental state and their mind could be full of extremely violent thoughts. these gamers could commit serious crime after getting influenced by outrageous brutality in video games.
Another obvious detrimental effect is that children, who play too much video games or watch a lot television, get socially isolated and could become mentally disturb that eventually lead depression. For instance, kids, who involve in these amusement activities, generally don't get social with friends and family and stay away from real fun activities and various social sport game that ultimately end up with mental depression.
Finally, gamers, who, spending excessive long hours on these entertainment activities, do not participate in physical activities that sometimes affect their nervous system along with other health issues such as obesity, weak eyesight etc. To illustrate, tremendous aggression in video games and in TV programmes affect kids brain that could result in seizures, numbness in hands and other health issues.
In conclusion, Although television and digital gaming platforms are medium of refreshment, I think that spending unrestricted excessive hours on these media affect kids' mental state terribly and result in offensive attitude, pessimism, anxiety, convulsions and other health issues. To mitigate these digital media related issues, parents should not allow kids to spend too much time on these pleasure activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66751269036 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.754854885 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571065989848 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1471395221 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.866666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290232043593 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997589799557 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361010784315 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160245599755 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433392404969 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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