some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age something that they should begin at the age seven discuss both view give your opinion
The correct as of enrollment in school has been taken mammoth dimension ever sense technology comes in limelight .A few section of society reckon that children should enroll at school in early age while other seems differently.This essay shall elucidate both the prospective along with mu slant in ensuing segment .
First and foremost, why do children admitted at academic place at beginning age.Owing to this toddler become more social as well as knowledgeable in first stage of life.To be more precise ,they gain education at a very early age which make them more intelligent and it also help them to get success in their future .in china for instance only four year children know to handle various technical tool the reason behind this they enrolled two year old student at kindergarten and teach them to a different skill which prepare them for their future .hence early age study play essential roles in toddlers life secondly not only this they are able to settle their life at a very young age where they have surplus experience through their study it make them more bold and successful .
However ,at the age seven the toddler understand the way of life and importance of study. Vy this i means ,they take more interest and pick up quickly the academic syllabus which reduce the burden of teacher as well as the parents .moreover they also get a sufficient amount of time to play and learn social and communication skills from the family .never the less they never get success as like the early as in role students they are more up to date with the knowledge and other skills rather then elder age students.
to the capsule although ebert all toddler is admitted in school might be helpful students as they get surplus amount of time in play game yet the early as students when the life span with the knowledge which they gain in toddler age i personaly believe that early age enrollment in school is more helpful for the quick
and holistic growth of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78070175439 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41804380517 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 224.860312194 49.4020404114 455% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.0 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.4 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27938358106 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148102519042 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620297116401 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127235360566 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821701851362 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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