Many University student part time work while studying at university is the suppository for negative development.
Gone are the days when indulging in work in early age had permitted. This notion has undergone see changes eversense technology comes in lime light. In this approach majority of post graduate doing a temporary job after callege hours. This essay shall elucidate the marit and drawbacks before reaching the result in enjoying segment.
First and foremost,reasons why University going youth indulge in odd jobs going to earn hefty amount,which they can use to manage their accommodation and fee.To illustrate, By earning through job they can invest money to fulfill their basic need such as house rent, cloth expenses many more. A survey report depict result in Canada for instance numerous college collegate manage their semester's fee by own work 80% youth are independent in this present scenario.Not only this but also working period improve their business skill and other which gave them infinity well being in the future profession.To be more percise on two part of work student can get chance to replacement in companies which will help them for get permanent work. Consequently, youth becoming more interesting to do work while study.
However,undoubtedly working in student life might affect their studies it become prominent cause of low grade in academic. what is more spending ample amount of time on work place make them lethargic. they might be not paid attention on the exams which is the reason they have lost the high standard job. Nevertheless,working students learn not only working skill but also the behaviour with the colleagues and Boss which helped them and their further future. In this case, they improve their problem solving skills and communication skills many more. Thus, extra for free hours working for university learner has a various profit.
To recapitulate, after demonstrate the both aspect I vehemently vouch that although working while study might affect the students grade yet it has a palthora of favourable affect which is the necessity of learners holistic growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24223602484 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82666023808 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.726685097 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212801731732 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689883504254 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606608247617 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119521264424 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663932342431 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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