Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
One must agree that mother earth is battling with the serious adverse affects of climatic changes, increase in population and lack of education in many countries. My nation, India will have two major problems in the next decade, first being population and education.This essay will discuss the problems in detail and the solutions for the same.
India already has 33% of world's population with only 7% of geographical area, and its estimated that this number will hit 50% by 2025. The crucial factors for this massive rise are male factor and lack of awareness among the citizens. Many Indians from across religions strongly believe that a boy is must, and family tree can be only extended by this way. Also, many of them are not using condoms, contraceptives due to certain superstitious beliefs. For instance, a research from country's think tank mentioned that just because of a boy, nearly 15% of the nation ended up having 3 children and 30% are not using any modern techniques due to lack of awareness. One strong way to curb this rise is strong measures like incentives in government schemes for the parents with a single child or no child. Awareness programs dedicated for birth control and free distribution of condoms and necessary equipment for the people can curb the growth rate.
With the advancements of the world, education plays a major role for everyone. Nation's literacy stands at an average of 60% which is considered very low by international standards. This poses a serious threat to the people as everything is getting digitalized and they will be cheated easily due to lack of understanding. Indeed, a study found that nearly 80% of people who are duped by online scams are with almost minimal or no schooling. The best way to solve this issue in my nation is increasing the no of schools, colleges across every nook and corner. To attract the poor children, education department must also provide 3 meals per day and all the required support like uniform, shoes, books etc.
To conclude, India is struggling with education and over growth rate in population. Strong measures from the congress and increased awareness can solve the ongoing population. Education infrastructure and school equipment for students should be made available for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04232804233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74487951278 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584656084656 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1985849104 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178341883363 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523461359975 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569553735112 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118126697449 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495563007411 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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