It was predicted that people in the 21st century would have much more leisure time than in past .
To what extent has this prediction come to true?
In the 21st century ,the advantages in technology is more useful for human life.the human life is very easy and speedy for technology. I agree with
this statement that human life use powerful technology and get save working hours. The current technology is better than past technology.
Firstly, Human life is getting easier owing to internet technology. Internet technology gives many thinks, people can studying online, shopping , make a
transaction online , paying electricity bill, gas bill, or many services use via online. individuals starting to buying online they are used e-shopping websites and
purchase the product and product deliver to own home. Customer do not satisfaction they can change and replaced the order. they are planning to holidays and
book hotel online,book air-tickets online.People can Use technology they creating lot of free time.
Secondly ,In the Modern technology windows and mac technology is one of the greatest inventions of technology development. For example, If People have not our own birth-
certificate, they can not any government office only go to the government website and fill up the details and get the by online and printout. nowadays , There are lot of
improvement in technology. People can sitting at home and starting Work from home.this way people save many time.
In conclusion, Technology development is one of the greatest invention of 21st century. It helps the people to save many more free time in their life.Technology has made
human life very easy and modern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36776859504 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90010268528 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586776859504 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8634807488 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100117470224 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376670882979 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349476177274 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041785116906 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037349164089 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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