Nowadays, many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of the course in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also brings a number of disadvantages. Discuss advantage and disadvantages of studying abroad. Give your opinion ?
There is no extremely small amount doubt that these days the majority of students preferring to study abroad than their native country for part or full-time course. This phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to students in terms of their higher education and career future. However, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to the same. I believe that, if there is some hardships on one side it will bring many benefits to the students on the other side.
To begin with the bright side, first and foremost I believe that to enhance their career in a better position lots of students choose overseas education after completion of their secondary schools.They thought that graduating from top most universities from abroad helps them to improve job profile in this competitive global village. For example, Multinational companies seeking top universities peoples.
Secondly, lots of foreign authorities accept the people who studied in their own countries to work there. This, in turn, helps them to achieve permanent residence easily there with government benefits and high pay scales.For example, Canada government provide high benefits for permanent resident migrants .
On the flip side of the coins, there are some negative consequences as well firstly, difficulty to adapt climate, culture and language creates trouble in terms of health, communication to some extent. This will diminish day by day. Secondly,some student has felt difficult to afford living expense but lots of foreign countries having part time job facilities.Thirdly,there must be a chance of character defect in absence of parents and guardians like some bad addictions.
In conclusion, I personally believe that merits outnumber the demerits, however efforts should be made to minimize the drawbacks. Migration to academic purpose benefits students in many ways and heps to accomplish bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50859106529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99758104454 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6932729374 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216544670019 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687711133839 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634294493639 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109707522189 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069241123835 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.