A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The author asserts that a government should offer centralized educational curriculum until they graduate high school. However, the author's statement seems too one-sided to beneficial points of unified curriculum. some examples shown us valid cases for the curriculum, but these cases cannot fully justify the statement.
Admittedly, centralized curriculum might be beneficial in certain cases. For instance, it facilitates making standards and criteria in college.
college can offer more effective education roadmap due to students' similar level of education. In other words, they do not need to adapt for each student. Also, it helps employers to make employment criteria. since employees have same levels of education, employment procedure does not have to consider a lot of things. Therefore, for education in colleges and industries, such curriculum might be useful.
On the other hand, such curriculum might not be effective to students' development. Centralized curriculum could ignore students' characteristic so that offered education might be both inefficient and ineffectual. since each student has considerably different idiosyncrasies and interests, diverse curriculum can help development of areas in which students are interested. For example, diverse levels of education are prevailing in many countries such as United States of America. Although students are in the same school, they take different courses considering their interests and traits. Similarly, in Republic of Korea, there are several high schools for specific educational purpose. Science high schools nurture future scientific researchers with a science-oriented curriculum which differs from other schools. students in science high schools significantly contributes to the nation using their ability developed from the special curriculum. As discussed above, different curriculum for each student might be more effectual than the same curriculum for all students.
In summary, even though some cases seem to provide evidence bolstering the above statement, we should be sure to remember that the same national curriculum cannot be beneficial in all situations. Given this, it is not always true that a government have to offer the same curriculum to all students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85410334347 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06282549758 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568389057751 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0474421562 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260036339896 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772013058885 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576276118661 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137623252327 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648673055391 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.